Wednesday, April 22, 2015

April 22nd, 2015

I received my final authentic audience response this morning!

Sergio Garcia 


And with that received I am completely finished with my ISP!

Tuesday, April 21, 2015

April 21st, 2015

Today I completed the rest of my first round of grading! I definitely have a lot more rounds of editing to go, but I think I have written and edited a great first draft!

I received another authentic audience survey from my mom, Amber Arnold!



I also received a survey from KayAnn Orr!

And Miranda Johnston!



I am now only missing 1 response for the survey, and I have reached out to Sergio Garcia to remind him about the survey!

Monday, April 20, 2015

April 20th, 2015

Today I edited the first 15 pages of my rough draft! I am definitely glad I did not rush into publishing the book!

I also collected 3 more survey responses!

Ri Trotter

Kristen Mazza


Nolan Thompson 



Thursday, April 16, 2015

April 16, 2015

Today I chose to give copies to five more people to increase my authentic audience!
1. Calli Smith (school counselor) 
2. Ri Trotter (English Teacher)
3. Sarah Glawe (friend)
4. Kristen Mazza (friend)
5. Miranda Johnston (family)

Calli and Ri really took the time to edit my rough draft and I really appreciate the time they took to do so! 

I also have two more responses on the survey from Calli Smith and Sarah Glawe!

Calli Smith


Sarah Glawe



Wednesday, April 15, 2015

April 15th, 2015

Today I am giving copies of my rough draft to my authentic audience! I typed up a little info sheet with the link for the survey on it. 

I decided to give my authentic audience until Tuesday to finish the survey to make sure they have ample time to read it! It also will give me a day to gather all of my ISP info before I turn it in or if someone doesn't complete the survey on time. 

This is what the rough draft looks like! I decided to put it in a report cover so my audience could easily remove the pages if they wanted to!



I delivered two copies to my doctor Kendall Brown and nurse Sergio Garcia at Cook Children's!

I also delivered two other copies to my friends KayAnn Orr and Nolan Thompson! My fifth copy went to my mom! I might possibly be expanding my audience,but I am not positive yet!

When I returned home from church I noticed I already had a completed survey from Dr.Kendall Brown! 



I'm excited to see the rest of my audience's feedback!


Tuesday, April 14, 2015

April 14th, 2015

Today is THE DAY!! I plan on completing the rough draft so I can give copies to my authentic audience tomorrow!

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I

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(I currently don't have any terms for the letter "k")

L

M

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R

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V

W

X

I currently have no terms for "y" and "z"

Now to make a survey for me authentic audience! I chose to make an online survey on surveymonkey.com !






My survey is now all ready to go and I am going to print out a sheet to give to my authentic audience tomorrow!